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| Screenshot of the Flix page via Photoshop |
The numbering system will need to be changed when completed, as I may add additional 'simpler' characters to draw and rearrange the order in what best suits the book.
As the second page attempted, I feel that the layout is working, however the images maybe too small and it may be suited to a double page, due to the descriptions not being in depth. Again I won't know it works till it's tested.
Flix still needs a background story though the one thing I am pleased about is her name. I am pleased with the character, and I believe even without the chest, her eyes are soft enough to pass her as a female especially with integrating the human body with a fox.
Probably best to also rotate the top image as it looks offputting when not being in a straight line.
Regarding the text; I think the font needs to be changed throughout and it's probably best to enter the text in different software, as Justifying the text is problematic (non existance) in Photoshop. Again another consideration for when feedback and a few pages have been completed.
